literature

Surprise Me

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A little bit of something,
Seems to be missing in my life.
There's still that push from behind
Telling me to get it right.
I've been waiting around for nothing,
And yes, that nothing is you.
You are the one I've been hoping for,
Wishing that I could have you,
To take care of,
Not because I need you.
But because I love you.
My love isn't built on some feeling,
That I would get from your kiss,
From your hand holding mine,
From any kind of physical bliss.
No, it's love from something stronger,
A sense of trust, unbreakable friendship.
I love you for who you are...
Not what you can do for me temporarily.
Nowadays people mistake love so easily,
For lust, a sensation driven-
By your mind's aching desires.
But I'm not blinded so easily.
I talk as if I know it all...
But I don't.
The only thing I do know for sure,
Is my address, name, and who I love.
And that's you again.
You're the answer to a lot of things,
Who I go to for comfort,
Who I think of more than most,
Why I smile out of the blue,
Why I take time to try and look beautiful...
Now if only, I knew how you truly felt.
About me...about us...about love in general.
Then I'd know everything I needed to.
Minus the whole chemistry deal of course...
So just, be the one to take a chance.
Become more than nothing to wait for.
Just come out and tell me the truth you feel...
I love being surprised.
That's exactly what the poem is about. I don't know yet! Its going to be a surprise to me...and whoever reads it. hah.
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fretbender's avatar
This is really really good. It's honest truthful flow is captivating. Really hope that special someone suprised you in a nice way. :hug: